KANONARA

Prose craft

Body language

The nonverbal channel of fiction, posture, gesture, facial expression and movement, carrying meaning and subtext beneath what the dialogue says aloud.

Body language is "a type of nonverbal communication in which physical behaviors, as opposed to words, are used to express or convey information": posture, gesture, facial expression, eye movement, touch, the use of space. In fiction, Carla Hoch's Writer's Digest definition applies it to the page: "any nonverbal communication that characterizes someone in a scene"; without it "a scene with no body language is like a face with no expression."

On the page it is the physical layer of subtext: what the body says while the dialogue says something else, the action-beat alternative to the dialogue tag, a beat of business carrying feeling beside the speech. Hoch's rules: "The body language of each character in a scene should be as unique as their dialogue," and "you need to show a cluster of behaviors," one cue alone being ambiguous, the caution Wikipedia raises about single signals. The two channels are balanced in how to write dialogue.

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